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Hello, if you’re reading this, you must be in some trouble, so you might well read farther. You’re gonna need it.
So you're wondering why I, an old rag doll journal you found in an abandon convenient store, is speaking to you. A tired travel who just wanted some water and stale cheetos. Well, I’ll tell you. My story and yours.
I am no meer teenage diary, I am a book containing knowledge far beyond the universe can hold. I know all things from Christopher Columbus to your 2nd cousin’s great-great-great grandniece’s grades. It might be a little scary holding such a powerful artifact, but if you keep reading, you can become like me. If you choose to set me down, then all knowledge you learn today will be lost. Including knowledge of my existence. So, will you read front to back, or move on with your life?
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I'm glad to see you’ve chosen to keep reading. You’re in for some fun. Oh! That tingling sensation in your feet? Don’t worry, it won’t harm you. It extend up through your body, and it may hurt at times, but do not be alarmed! It is only filling you with the knowledge you wish to possess.
I hope this doesn’t start to seem boring, I know I’m talking worthless small talk, but each word you skim over fills you with hundreds of years worth of knowledge. Because that's what you asked for when you picked up this book, isn’t it?
! Don’t set this book down! The pain will be unbearable, trust me. I would know.
Is the tingling increasing? It should be around your hips now, if it is, then you doing everything right. Keep reading, keep reading, you’ll learn that thing you want to know. Maybe it’s Washington’s first word? Or what’ll happen in 2138. That’ll be one tough year for you humans. Speaking of humans, you technically aren’t one anymore. You’re knowledge is already too great, too extensive. That’s okay though.
We’re almost there, and yes, I am in human form now. It may seem a little weird, but , you must do as I did. You must spread this powerful knowledge onto the next person.
If you can’t feel you’re body, then we are right on track. You shouldn’t have any movement. Try to roll your wrist. Not working? Perfect! Now, I am going to set you here and go take a little stretch, so you just sit here. If any comes by, find a way to get their attention. It may be your only chance at a human form again. Have fun!
Comments (2)
Hey! I'm Clovie, I'm here to provide you some on the 2nd POV Challenge! (^.^)
The storyline really grabbed my attention, and despite it being partly written in first person, your grammar and sentence structures are wonderful! The plot is really interesting and provides a sense of mystery and almost a fantasy feel. I love your use of commas and I'm happy there aren't any run on sentences! Overall, I enjoyed it immensely! :blush:
Ahh thank you so much!! I definitely that for the next time I write 2nd POV ! :two_hearts: