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Into the abyss

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falsa veris 05/19/19
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Driving my car

With my child in the back

Driving carefully

In the dark of the night

I check on my loving daughter

She's peacefully asleep

Next thing I know

crash

We are now on a boat

Going through a sea of storm clouds

Charolette goes overboard

I throw her the life saver

She grabs it

But at the last second it slips off

I tie a rope to my waist

And jump in to save her

The rope unties when I get to her

Now we're both lost into the abyss

This is what I have left of my dear friend

With his attempt to save his daughter

Sweetly they went into the abyss

Holding each other's hand in the end

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Into the abyss-Driving my car
With my child in the back
Driving carefully
In the dark of the night

I check on my loving daug
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Aw, this is so sad!

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1 Reply 05/19/19

Yeah, it was meant to be, most of my poems are meant to be sad or depressing, this is one of the few that don't represent my real life

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1 Reply 05/19/19

Reply to: falsa veris

Aw!

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