this is the first time I've tried writing haiku. So don't get your hopes up T_T also treat the bonus haiku as a meme. Don't count that 🫥
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⠀⠀ ⠀⠀ i. Quiet collapse
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ Tiny spider web
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ Fierce wind glissades in a blink—
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ day’s travail undone.
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⠀⠀ ⠀⠀ ii. Luminescence
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ Dusk serenity
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ moonbeam on still leaves,
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ makes time forget to breathe.
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⠀⠀ ⠀⠀ iii. Tree weeps
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ Oak tree weeps in fog
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ loneliness bristles in leaves
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ roots pine in silence.
![Haiku challenge || 🪐-[C] <a href='/c/poetry/tag/echoesofhaiku/'>#echoesofhaiku</a>
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⠀⠀ ⠀⠀ iv. Sanguineli
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ Autumn beauty aflow
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ sanguine view, amber hush—
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ soft wind cradles gold.
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⠀⠀ ⠀⠀ v. Blue
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ Sky kisses the waves
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ horizon blurs in blue brine
⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀ salt-kissed wind exhales.
![Haiku challenge || 🪐-[C] <a href='/c/poetry/tag/echoesofhaiku/'>#echoesofhaiku</a>
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Comments (14)
Rlly felt that last one :pensive: 🤚🏼 it just speaks to me
(On another note the haikus are so good for ur first time) I didn’t even count my syllables the first time I tried one haha, so this is fabulous!!
Thank you so much, Samy🤍btw that's a memeiku lol (named by Dash)
And yes keeping the syllable count right was a struggle :sob:
Reply to: ama
We stan the memeiku hahaha
aww these haikus are so pretty, I love them so much uwu <3
[ the bonus haiku is fine asf but can't vouch for it I'm sorry :sob: :hand: 🏻 ]
Reply to: ama
yvw :eyes: :sparkling_heart:
( :relieved: still very contradictory to what it's saying, you write some of the best haikus :triumph: )
Reply to: ⊹⸝⸝ Medha ⊰
Thank you🫶🏻
Atp y’all gassing me up enough to unleash a whole series of crackhead haikus :sob:
Reply to: ama
:joy: :sparkling_heart: I'm very greedy when it comes to poems so why not :eyes: :sparkles:
Personally, the bonus mircro poem is a win for me!
Also wonderfully written for your first time! ^-^
Reply to: DASH
Thank youu :blue_heart:
You're motivating me to write crackhead haikus now. I might end up creating a new haiku category :relieved:
Reply to: ama
Memeiku 🫶
Reply to: DASH
Perfect 🤍