This is a song that I randomly came up with whilst walking home in the rain
How do I tell someone my deepest and darkest secrets
If I just want to lose it all
You shower me with kind words and compliments
But I don't hear anything at all
Rain falls on my skin like starlight droplets
But there's nothing to feel
Once so warm, my heart is now frozen
The ice that I can't heal
I don't want to be saved
There's better people that's worth saving
Just not me, I can't be saved
I can't be saved
It's not worth it, so please stop trying
You can't save someone who doesn't feel anything
No more days of sunlight
I am slowly dying
Consumed by my darkest demons
My mind is now my ruin
Left from days long ago
There's nowhere else that I can go
So don't save me
I can't be saved
Just don't save me
I can't be saved.
Comments (5)
Damn, reading all this as a hobby producer is giving me ideas left and right!
I love this. It's so instantly relatable for so many of us and I think that makes it easily brilliant.
Reply to: mayumichan
Thank you! I somewhat base a lot of what I write on what I feel and think
If that happens to be relatable, yay! to that :blush:
Nice and upbeat, I see :relaxed:
You should try putting this to music sometime, this would be an awesome song!
Reply to: FireAndAsh
Yay thank you! I'll see what I can do with it :grinning: