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In The Eyes of Death (5)

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Does it hurt to take my hand?

Does it hurt to act like this is fine?

You say you need more time

But time is all you don't have

Did you die a human?

Did you die a monster?

Your soul should be clean

But clean it is not

Do you wish you were dead?

Do you wish you were alive?

You cling to the Land of the Living

But the living slip you through their fingers

Does it hurt to take my hand?

Does it hurt to let go?

You ask for your life back

But life asks for you to never come back

In The Eyes of Death (5)-Does it hurt to take my hand?
Does it hurt to act like this is fine?
You say you need more time
But

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I would suggest the same for this one! I love this series oml :heart: :heart:

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0 Reply 01/13/18

Okay I love the concept, but the rhyme scheme felt just a wee bit off on this one. Nothing too bad, I would just try reading stuff outloud to test the flow of it! Again I am absolutely in love with this series so far!

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