[ Behind The Scene ~ Draft ] :airplane: LOOΠΔ winning the Rookie award :airplane: ~ ✾ crazy dream ? or an actual eventuality ? ✾

안녕 !

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soooo i've ed recently what we call in ~ my country ~ a ''dissertation''

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[no need to say my post was just a shoooooorter version of a dissertation]

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and to write such a post you need to :

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~ organise your thoughts !

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so first : i have an idea ~ une thèse in french ~ that i will have to prove with arguments and these arguments must have foundings, examples

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all this is a ~ only ~ a way to answer a question

mine was : does LOOΠΔ have any chance to win to rookie award ?

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there's no GOOD nor BAD answer, the quality of an essay ~ let's call it essay ~ is ONLY determined by the way // by how you answer

your essay should ALWAYS be logical and clear and follow the theme of the question subject

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as i wrote and am writing :airplane: LOOΠΔ winning the Rookie award :airplane: , i used a typical type of essay ~ dissertation ~ being :

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✶ I - exposition of my idea

✷ II - explain the limits of the idea

✹ III - conclusion considering my parts

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i like to think it's

§ part I - all white

§ part II - all black

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so it's a binary version of the world ~ manichéenne as you would say in ~ it's either black or white

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buuuut

§ part III - is all in shades of grey

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as you grow up, you realise that there is no true limit between good // bad and that the world is not binary but has various possibilies ~ like shades ~

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or can see it in this way

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§ part I - yes

§ part II - no

§ part III - maybe

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and within my § part 1 here is my draft

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as you can see in § part 1,

★ there's 3 sub - parts with their own examples

★ each of the sub - part has a one - line conclusion

the § part one is concluded by a transition ~ ouverture in french ~ which introduce the § part 2

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i hope it was clear enough and you've understood how i work

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[of course this is a smaller version with a lot of liberty taken]

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with much love,

stay strong and safe,

Eléonore

:hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts: :hearts:

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