Hello fellow readers and writers.
A little poem.
I tried to stick to the following syllables per line etc...
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6a
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6c
5b
Sorry for the spacing issues... Not sure what's going on lately with this..... (help)
Please comment if you feel moved to do so. :pray:
Poem: Dystopian GPS.
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Down by the dying stream
Nothing grows no more
Waters mostly acid
Dead fish on the shore
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Stench of decay's dispair
Coal black streaks of sludge
Rusting parts of autos
Too heavy to budge.
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Broken glass in the mud
Burried like land-mines
Even the rocks are grave
Everything declines
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Up by the old school-house
The paths overgrown
Windows all broken in
Romance overthrown
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Our old 'Giving Tree'
Gives us no longer
Cool shade turned to splinters
Sun's getting stronger
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Our recent Idols: -stacks
Reach through the smog's top
Ceiling: -smoke and ash
No moment to stop
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Abandoned avenues
Highways deserted
Humanitys' progress
Simply inverted
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Burned out buildings throughout
Burned forests widespread
Burned fossil fuels choking
Burned books now unread
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Ignorance in power
Power from damn lies
Lies spoken openly
Please OPEN your eyes
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Just past the rusty gate
Saint Peter's pearly whites
Shine down upon mankind
As one tired poet writes.
The end





Comments (5)
You asked to comment if I felt moved. Well, that was definitely moving.
Love it. Especially stanzas 1 and 5. You're definitely not a Vogon :)
First person to ever say that!!!
You have my undying gratitude!!!!
This literally gave me chills. You, my friend, possess a wonderful power. The echo of the lines in each stanza is so swift.
Also, I thought I was the only one with the spacing issues. (;O;)
I can't thank you enough for the kind words.