Little did they know
And they knew so little
Little about me
And yet they spoke
Like they knew everything
They've created the new me
Someone who liked blue
More than purple
Someone who liked company
More than solitary
If you just said hello
If you gave me an innocent smile
I would've told you
About those purple skies
That I saw in her eyes
How she would never leave
But give me the space I need
She would read a book
Across the room
While I stared out the window
Daydreaming of our future
But you'll never know
Because you continue to assume
You'll never know
Because you don't love me
Like I once loved her
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[I]And they knew so little
[B]Little about me
[I]And yet they spoke
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Comments (8)
Wow...
Just- Wow...
This is AMAZING! I love this, it's so... I just... I'm speechless! It's perfectly written and styled. Keep writing!!! :blush: :cherry_blossom:
Thank you sweetie, your kind words make my day better :two_hearts:
Reply to: Iris
And yours do mine. :blush: :cherry_blossom:
This is so pretty :heart_eyes: :heart_eyes: I loove the style and how it's written, and it's just so easy to read and interesting to interpet. Also, awesome edit~
Well done :smile: :yellow_heart: :yellow_heart: :two_hearts:
Thank you, you're so sweet, it makes me so happy :two_hearts: :kissing_heart:
Powerful piece, Iris and the purple images and background makes the piece all the more captivating to read. Tell me, where were you planning to head with this piece? What is the meaning of it for you? To me it seems like someone trying to explain their love to the readers but the narrator doubting that the reader will ever understand that love, and that’s what I think is a harsh truth. Love is different for everybody, and everyone has their own interpretations of how they see this abstract feeling, and how it feels to them. This piece really hit me and made me realise that all the times I told someone I understand how they feel, I don’t, because I’m not them, and they’re not me.
Another thing I noticed is that this links onto how we are all our own person, and everything is different. I think you did a good job with displaying that message in our heads too.
I feel like this poem has some much hidden meanings in it, even though there’s so little content ( ba-dum tish! ).
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed this post, and I’m so glad that you did post this because I’ve been wanting to see something new from you. Everything that you write has so much potential and aestheticism in it, your writing really is satisfying and thoughtful to read. So, please don’t feel shy to post here, or about your writing in general. I know that there’s plenty of people who love what you post, and I bet those two think you deserve to be featured and given props. I hope to hear from you soon. :star2: :heart: :two_hearts:
Oh my goodness... You wrote more words in your comment then me in my poem :joy: thank you, I appreciate every word :heart: :smile: To answer your questions, I have not thought about any of that, you actually made it sound better than it is, I wrote it in short period of time and I just let the words flow.. In my mind I had the thought or some kind of anger towards people who judge others and think they know everything about them when it's not true and they spread lies, it's been bugging me for a while
Reply to: Iris
I totally think that just letting your mind flow and the words drift on the paper, is a great way of writhing, and for that reason I’m going to keep that in mind for when I write in the future, so I myself can come up with beautiful pieces like yours.
Also, I think what you were basically thinking about at the time, really placed the power and meanings for the readers to interpret in different ways. And also don’t worry, I never know what my stories are about either. X