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"You're pissing me off."
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ᴛʜɪs ᴛᴇᴍᴘʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴡᴀs ᴍᴀᴅᴇ ʙʏ •°ιnĸ°•.
『 General 』
•°ғɪʀsᴛ ɴᴀᴍᴇ°•
⊱Sakura
•°ғɪʀsᴛ ɴᴀᴍᴇ ᴍᴇᴀɴɪɴɢ°•
⊱a flowering cherry tree; cherry blossoms collectively
•°sᴜʀɴᴀᴍᴇ°•
⊱Willows
•°sᴜʀɴᴀᴍᴇ ᴍᴇᴀɴɪɴɢ°•
⊱Willow refers to willow trees with long wispy branches that have the capability of having purple flowers blossom from them. But in the sense of "Willows", it means multiple.
•°ɴɪᴄᴋɴᴀᴍᴇ(s)°•
⊱Saki, "Maroon Javelin"
•°ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀ°•
⊱Female
•°ʀᴀᴄᴇ°•
⊱Human
•°ᴘʜʏsɪᴄᴀʟ ᴀɢᴇ°•
⊱25
•°ᴍᴇɴᴛᴀʟ ᴀɢᴇ°•
⊱45
•°ᴀᴄᴛᴜᴀʟ ᴀɢᴇ°•
⊱40
•°ʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴛɪᴄ ᴀɴᴅ sᴇxᴜᴀʟ ᴏʀɪᴇɴᴛᴀᴛɪᴏɴ°•
⊱Bisexual/Demiromantic
•°ᴏᴄᴄᴜᴘᴀᴛɪᴏɴ°•
⊱S-Class Huntress; Commander in Chief of the Valean Military.
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"Listen here. You don't get to tell me what to do."
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『 Appearance 』
•°ʜᴀɪʀ°•
⊱Ass length (like the tip of her hair touches her ass), maroon in color
•°ᴇʏᴇs°•
⊱Maroon
•°sᴋɪɴ°•
⊱Tanned
•°ʙᴏᴅʏ sʜᴀᴘᴇ°•
⊱Mesomorph
•°ʜᴇɪɢʜᴛ ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴇɪɢʜᴛ°•
⊱5'6" and 145 lbs.
•°ᴛᴀᴛᴛᴏᴏs°•
⊱Maroon colored Willow tree located on right shoulder blade.
•°ᴘɪᴇʀᴄɪɴɢs°•
⊱N/A
•°sᴄᴀʀs°•
⊱N/A
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"What do you mean by 'You don't know what to do'? I just gave you clear orders."
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『 Apparel 』
•°ᴄᴀsᴜᴀʟ°•
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"Did you bring food? No? Go get some then."
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『 Personality 』
•°ʙᴀsɪᴄ ᴅᴇsᴄʀɪᴘᴛɪᴏɴ°•
⊱Stubborn and hard headed when it comes to injuries. Sakura will push through that pain until she's alone. Sakura will fight for her beliefs as well as her family, friends, colleagues, and nation when need be.. When in combat Sakura tends to get cocky, especially if the odds are in her favor. That tends to put her guard down a little. But if she knows the odds are in her opponent's favor, she's not cocky and will be defensive. Her emotions are odd when she's enraged. There's a mix of fear and rage, which will cause her attacks to be sloppy, leaving chances of openings.
•°ʟɪᴋᴇs°•
⊱Food
⊱Gaming
⊱Fighting
•°ᴅɪsʟɪᴋᴇs°•
⊱Assholes
•°ᴅʀᴇᴀᴍs ᴀɴᴅ ɢᴏᴀʟs°•
⊱To make sure that innocent lives are safe and have a good life.
⊱To honor her cousin's values.
•°ғᴇᴀʀs°•
⊱Failing those that need her most.
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"Ha! You don't know what you're dealing with! This fight is already over!"
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『 Combat 』
•°ᴀᴜʀᴀ°•
⊱Electric Maroon; 120%; x3
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•°sᴘᴇᴄɪᴀʟ sᴋɪʟʟs°•
⊱Reading people's emotions and movement.
•°sᴇᴍʙʟᴀɴᴄᴇ°•
⊱Chain Barrier. This isn't a semblance that Sakura uses much. This is normally used to: corner an opponent to create a 1v1 fight; capture targets; block off danger to bystanders. Depending on how large the barrier is, her aura depletes at a certain rate (small- 5% per post. Medium- 10% per post. Large- 15% per post). The barrier is an aura construct, the links looking like squares. The chains are placed at random. The drawback of this is once the semblance is deactivated, Sakura's recovery time is slowed.
•°ғɪɢʜᴛɪɴɢ sᴛʏʟᴇ°•
⊱Mid/Long range
•°ᴡᴇᴀᴘᴏɴ°•
⊱Javelin Unchained: This is a javelin that has been modified to extend by chain links and can act like nunchucks for fighting longer distances and faster movement.
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•°ᴀʀᴍᴏʀ°•
⊱N/A
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"I'm...not sure if this is a good idea."
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『 Relationships 』
•°ᴍᴏᴛʜᴇʀ°•
⊱ɴᴀᴍᴇ: Unknown
⊱sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Unknown
⊱ʀᴇʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴsʜɪᴘ: ɢᴏᴏᴅ/ʙᴀᴅ/ᴏᴋᴀʏ
•°ғᴀᴛʜᴇʀ°•
⊱ɴᴀᴍᴇ: Unknown
⊱sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Unknown
⊱ʀᴇʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴsʜɪᴘ: ɢᴏᴏᴅ/ʙᴀᴅ/ᴏᴋᴀʏ
•°sɪʙʟɪɴɢs°•
⊱ɴᴀᴍᴇ: Wisteria Willows (Cousin)
⊱sᴛᴀᴛᴜs: Dead
⊱ʀᴇʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴsʜɪᴘ: ɢᴏᴏᴅ
•°ғʀɪᴇɴᴅs°•
⊱ɴᴀᴍᴇ:
⊱sᴛᴀᴛᴜs:
⊱ʀᴇʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴsʜɪᴘ: ɢᴏᴏᴅ/ʙᴀᴅ/ᴏᴋᴀʏ
ʟᴏᴠᴇ ɪɴᴛᴇʀᴇsᴛ
⊱ɴᴀᴍᴇ:
⊱sᴛᴀᴛᴜs:
⊱ʀᴇʟᴀᴛɪᴏɴsʜɪᴘ:
⊱ᴅᴏ ᴛʜᴇʏ ᴋɴᴏᴡ?:
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"I'm not doing this for my own personal interest...I'm doing this to honor my late cousin."
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『 Background 』
•°ʙᴀᴄᴋsᴛᴏʀʏ°•
⊱Sakura was born into a family that went into the military after going to Combat Academies. It didn't matter which one, as long as it was a military and their skills were in good service to their nations. Sakura went to Signal, then went to Beacon. After her years in Beacon, she decided to go into the Valean Batallion, making her way through the ranks with efficiency and held her position as Master Sergeant at the age of 30. However, she worked her ass off to become a Lieutenant after the attack on Beacon where she learned that her cousin Wisteria Willows was among those fallen. Wisteria and Sakura were very close for cousins, almost sisters. When Saki was off duty, the two would talk about anything. Saki would even help Wist with homework and combat.
Anyways. At the age of 35, Saki was promoted to General due to her excellence and efficiency in the job. She started to work on changing the way the Batallion worked with every operation she was given. When the Commander in Chief at the time retired, they promoted Sakura to that rank, trusting her judgements. By the time she got promoted, Sakura was 39.
•°ᴅᴀᴛᴇ ᴏғ ʙɪʀᴛʜ°•
⊱03/20
•°ᴘʟᴀᴄᴇ ᴏғ ʙɪʀᴛʜ°•
⊱Vale
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" :musical_note: Leaves from the vine....moving so slow... :musical_note: "
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Comments (4)
Aight so, good OC. But there’s a small issue.
30 and already leading their country’s military? If she graduated Beacon and then ed the military, that would mean, at most, she got to that rank after 9 years.
Whilst I’m not the one deciding how to run this, since this is your military, this feels to just be a bit too young for it to make much sense. But it’s easy to fix. Bump up the age a bit. With exceptional service, they’ll probably be able to get to their current role in their late thirties at the youngest, or early fifties at the oldest.
So possibly age 34 or 35?
Reply to: Orion Pervenche
You could go with that age, but should probably add a bit more explanation as to why since that’s still quite young.
If you want their promotion to be a recent thing, then pick the age you suggested. If less recent, add a few more years to keep things reasonable.
Aside from that, I would recommend adding an explanation to further explain, perhaps a small story? I won’t decide for you, but I will give an example.
The example being the Atlesian CIC, Adamaris. She got to her position thanks to a coup, where she had the backing of a majority of the general staff. But before that she already had a pretty exceptional service. She’s been leading Atlas for a decade now, but she managed to attain her position in her thirties thanks to having friends in the right places plus an unstable kingdom that was having to deal with corporate rule.
Detailing the greatest parts of Sekura’s service before she got to her current rank and how she got there would help flesh out as a character as well, aside from making her current rank more feasible. I’ll leave that up to you though.
Reply to: Einar(t) the Destroyer
Okay. So I've made some adjustments. How does it look now?