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I don't like change

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Iris; 06/15/21
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Winter resembles pain and death

And it's cold, so cold

Through the air flows my breath

World is getting old

But I adore the warm fireplace

Following someone's trace

Acting like a child for one more day

Gives me a good reason to stay

While spring tastes delicious

Nature inhales life and starts painting

At first flowers were suspicious

Now they found life worth celebrating

Unfortunately it feels like it's gone

It can't handle heavy rain

Trees are dying again all alone

Someone stop their pain

Summer lingers in the air

But every day is unpredictable

People come and go without care

Their resistance is visible

I still think about picnics on the hill

And running further against all will

We stopped thinking how life is tragic

And believed that we are made of magic

Autumn reminded me of a frown

Dragons and a green raincoat

Days where I wanted to drown

But I would just float

We hid under a pile of leaves

Told them we were thieves

Lies from which no one recovers

Silenced unfortunate lovers

I don't like change-[I]Winter resembles pain and death 
[I]And it's cold, so cold
[I]Through the air flows my breath
[I]World

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This is just a random poem that's been in my drafts for a while now, I felt like finishing it. This is my way of procrastinating, I'm so tired of studying

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Oh wow! I really like the alternating ABAB and AABB rhyme. The way you bounce between complaining about a season but then praise it in the next stanza, really works with this format. I love it!!! I got a bit confused at the end but I didn’t stop vibing so that’s good. :3

And it’s okay to take a break! Studying isn’t everything; make sure you take care of your health, too. <3

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Thank you so much :heart: :heart:

It's probably confusing cause it wasn't written at the same time, i lowkey forgot where i was going with it but I'm so happy you noticed the difference in rhyme and feelings about the seasons

I just wanna rest the whole day but i have no time ~

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