Winter resembles pain and death
And it's cold, so cold
Through the air flows my breath
World is getting old
But I adore the warm fireplace
Following someone's trace
Acting like a child for one more day
Gives me a good reason to stay
While spring tastes delicious
Nature inhales life and starts painting
At first flowers were suspicious
Now they found life worth celebrating
Unfortunately it feels like it's gone
It can't handle heavy rain
Trees are dying again all alone
Someone stop their pain
Summer lingers in the air
But every day is unpredictable
People come and go without care
Their resistance is visible
I still think about picnics on the hill
And running further against all will
We stopped thinking how life is tragic
And believed that we are made of magic
Autumn reminded me of a frown
Dragons and a green raincoat
Days where I wanted to drown
But I would just float
We hid under a pile of leaves
Told them we were thieves
Lies from which no one recovers
Silenced unfortunate lovers
![I don't like change-[I]Winter resembles pain and death
[I]And it's cold, so cold
[I]Through the air flows my breath
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This is just a random poem that's been in my drafts for a while now, I felt like finishing it. This is my way of procrastinating, I'm so tired of studying
Comments (3)
All I have to say is that this is so soft and I really love it, especially your beautiful use of language ^-^ :revolving_hearts: Your writing is always wonderful to read, it flows so well!
Oh wow! I really like the alternating ABAB and AABB rhyme. The way you bounce between complaining about a season but then praise it in the next stanza, really works with this format. I love it!!! I got a bit confused at the end but I didn’t stop vibing so that’s good. :3
And it’s okay to take a break! Studying isn’t everything; make sure you take care of your health, too. <3
Thank you so much :heart: :heart:
It's probably confusing cause it wasn't written at the same time, i lowkey forgot where i was going with it but I'm so happy you noticed the difference in rhyme and feelings about the seasons
I just wanna rest the whole day but i have no time ~