The last straw

This is an attak against the lovely Heather the book worm!! I will be writing a horror story. Please enjoy.

There was a bang. A loud noise of some sort from just around the corner.

Breathing as though it was a pant, wiping sweat off my head, trying to untie the knot in my stomach

My cheeks redder than a tomato.

Hearing creaks In the floor, looking at the blood-stained hardwood floor.

The lights flickering, about to fall off the ceiling

I looked at the window, and all of a sudden, a loud bang with a bloody handprint appearing on the window.

Holding in my scream, looking around the corner seeing a big dark figure.

Only getting scared by the sight, I looked away just to see a man, with a giant kitchen knife, covered in a dark cloak, at the same window.

A shriek squeezed out of my mouth.

The creaking from around the corner stopped, then started to come closer.

Looking up, I saw a broken chin-up bar.

I held my breath and climbed up onto a wooden table, and held myself up on the bar.

I hoisted myself up and a hugged the bar like a koala.

The dark figure walked by, as soon as he was out of sight, the other man shattered the window.

The bar fell onto the rickety floor, causing it to break as I crashed through the floor, right in front of the other figure.

I started to crawl away getting cornered, just as the other figure jumped down.

Getting cornered with all of the sharp blades, and knifes.

Letting out what I thought to be my last scream, I looked over to see a wooden planks on the floor uncovering a secret age.

I got up and darted out, running into the dark of the night, finally seeing the light of the moon, and diving into a large pond.

I swam across, looking back to see the men.

I went under the pond and saw a small hole in the pond. I went to the surface, took in a deep breath and swam towards the small tunnel.

Lucky for me I just made it through the tunnel to see both men just stuck in it without any air.

Returning to the surface to gasp for breath I felt grateful I made it out alive

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