#CritiqueDayJan

TRIS POV

Tory then beings class and say we are free to draw anything with in reason so that she can see what we are capable of and gauge where we are at with our artistic skills.

Deciding on something I take out my pencils that she got me for Christmas last year I decide to draw my racing car with its engine looking like it was being lowered in to it. After about 15 minuets or so four and his gan walks in late as usual this makes me look up and over at Tory who has stopped them in there tracks just all little ways past the door.

"And just wat do you four boys think your doing walking in to my lesson 15 minuets after the bell has rang" she says with a sickly sweet tone of voice

Four answers for them "well like you said we are walking in 15 minuets late" he says trying to sound clever.

This makes Tory smile "well I'm glad you cleared that up for me I wasn't sure if I was going blind in my old age" she says still in her sweet voice with a hit of sarcasm mixed in there but I could tell she was serious pissed and was currently covering up my laughing with a cough so that no one know I know what was a not by happen.

At this four and his gan all burst out laughing to witch Tory also starts laughing "I now know the perfect punishment " she said grin like the cat form Alice I'm wonder land this also makes me smile getting me a funny look of Christina and Lyn I just nod my head in the direction of Tory not saying a word and spoiling the final in there showed faces to come.

By this time Tory's expression had changed to pure anger so four and his gang of idiots must have said something to piss her off that bind it quite hear.

TORY'S POV

there is one thing I can't stand and that is being late and well the boys who walked I late will find it just how I can be if you get on the wrong side of me. But then again I might just let them think they have got of lightly.

"why are you late? " I ask forcthr second time since there firs was more,of what are you doing walking in 15 minutes late wanting to know there lame excuses

"well we were wrestling a bear" one of them says at this I just raise my eye brow at them

"Urin shut up" the other one answers that looks more or less the same am guessing there brother's this then starts them bickering about being a Pansy

At this the last one of the four speak up "will you both shut up" he says looking annoyed at this I cross my arms and start tipping g my foot showing that I am getting annoyed at them now

"will you all just take your seats and shut up" i shout but not loud enough to tell them I am serious about this before I make my way over to tris who is grinning like some sort of idiot at what am guessing was then three getting it by me. Well they don't know it yet but they will get it they must think we got of lightly

Tris POV

Tory makes her way over probably seeing me grinning like an idiot as most if the teachers just let them get on with it but not to rub she will not have it in her lessons but don't get me wrong she can have just as much fun as the rest of us if not more and she is pretty chill as well.

"what are you grinning about tris? " Tory asks a bit confused

"Just you" I reply putting my pencil down to sew that my work had disappeared This makes me turn my smile in a scowl as I turn me attention over to four and his group to see that there was my beautiful baby car, well more of a drawing, right in his hands showing the while class or holding it up for all to see.

What if they figure out I am six cause no one would has ever see me there ever that is mainly cause I am all discussed and shut in but who els would know that car as well as I do.

This is when peter speaks up "hey that's six's car" he shouts loud enough to make me sink in my seat and for the while class to now be looking at the image. This makes Tory spring to action knowing I didn't want the attention being six would bring to my quiet life.

"that's it your all dismissed tris I want a word with you now everyone out before start handing out detentions" she yells at the top of her voice knowing it would make them all move and fast. Four puts down the drawing and is first out of the door along with urin and Zeke followed by the rest of the class.

After every but Christina and lyn who are out of the room one is out Tory turns on me noticing they are still there "I though I asked you to leave?" She says not sure if she wants to give them a detention after all they had been talking to me all through class. She then gives me the look to say is it saved and I just nod back

At this she turns to both of then "you repeet nothing I or si- Tris" says she corrects her self quickly they both nod not Dearing to speack "well this complicates things for us now I want you to just say you have been to the races and have a good memory" she says not even a little bit worried that I could be potentially outed here and my life rewind. This makes them both look confused.

She then lets me go just as the lunch bell rings and I walk to the cafeteria and grab my lunch with Christina and Lyn and they lead me over to there table not giving me much choice I. The matter as Chris had he arm linked with my, probably some she can be sure I don't run away.

Christina smiled and introduced me to the others who were all girls at the table there was Christina and Lyn who I all ready knew then there was Shauna and Marleen who were both in some of my lessons but hadn't met yet, we were defiantly in music together. I still kinda had poofy eyes and was asked about it by it by Shauna but just told her I have hay fever not wanting to go in to details about me and my complicated life.

The rest of the day went by fast with Christina Lyn and Shauna and Marleen in the rest of my lessons so we just sit and talk as well as laugh at the back of the room. Witch earns !e a few looks if the teachers as I am usually sat in the middle to front of the class tgatvans I am with friends if I could dall them that at the end if the day they ask for !y number so we all swap before Tory comes out dropping me of home before heading out again this time in her bike

When I getvih the house I see there is no one around so I make my self a peanut butter and jam sandwich and grab a bottle of Pepsi before heading g up to my room. Starting on my numeracy home work I get a couple of math problems done before I here my phone go off with a text from Christian.

C- hey girl

T- hey what's up

C- I was just wondering what your doing tonight

T- I'm a bit busy tonight why

C- there is a race set to be going g down and you need to be here

T- I can't I have a thing that got to be done am so sorry gtg sorry see you later

This makes me a little nervous but I think nothing if it no one would ever recognise me in my racing stuff anyway I mean I have been Doing this for sometime now.

After texting Chris I change in to my racing outfit that was a pair of black skin tight ripped jeans a gray vest top and a small black leather jacket as well as a pair of black heels with silver studs at the back and running g down the heal it's self. I then go and start on my makeup applying a light layer of foundation the making my eyes look smoky and putting on my signature red lipstick and even my blue s I plug some small curls in the bottom of my blond hair before leaving the house.

I got in my car and headed over to the meaning spot and see how many people have arrived and there us allot so I go over to Amar and hand the money over that's two grand in total there are a couple others in this race some i recognise and some who are new and that's when I see him four his is he here and why is he coming over to amar for this is not good not good at all but nowi know he is not just a on looker