Rule #1
Maintain your uniform in the most presentable fashion at all times. It is the symbol of who you serve and your sense duty to that individual.
Rule #2
All orders for your noble must be carried out with the upmost respect even if emotions contradict them being carried out.
Rule #3
Protect your noble at all costs, for you are their last line of defense. Even if it means your life.
These are the rules of the combat servants. The highest ranking workforce for the nobility.
After the murder of the king and queen as well several high ranking noble figures, the demand for combat servants is high while the volunteers get lower by the day. When word flies around that the young orphaned princess may be the next target of the murder, her fresh out of the academy servant is assigned to her. Being a complete newbie to the combat side of her maid training, Sophie struggles to keep up with the more experienced servants while assassins lurk around every corner. But at the same time she’s protecting the princess, she must also act as a friendly shoulder to lean on for the young ruler to be. This proves to be difficult. After all they don’t teach you how to make friends at the academy.
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“The life of a true servant is more than just following orders. It’s to help the great become legendary.”
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Comments (1)
Hi there! I’m here to give you some on your synopsis (^-^)
Starting off with the 3 rules intrigued me. It makes me curious about the setting of the story and makes clear what the genre of the story is. Though, I do think it’s a bit unnecessary information.
I think throughout the whole synopsis you tell a lot of information that you could maybe better explain in the story. Right now, it looks a bit like an information dump because of all the detailed information (^-^;).
“fresh out of the academy servant” should be written like: fresh-out-of-the-academy servant.
Then, there’s also this sentence:
“But at the same time she’s protecting the princess, she must also act as a friendly shoulder to lean on for the young ruler to be.”
The sentence sounds a bit weird, especially when you read it after the sentence before that one. Maybe you could change it to something like:
“But while she is protecting the princess, she must also act as...”
I’d suggest you to work a bit more on sentence structures. You have a lot of the same structures at the moment, which makes it a bit repetitive. Also, try to avoid run on sentences. Split some sentences up or shorten them ;)
I do like the story idea, it looks very interesting :3