First Digital drawing! Redraw!

Today is the 1 year anniversary of my very first digital drawing! Aka this one;

So today I decided to redraw it!

Here's how it turned out! I'm pretty proud of it actually

I hope I've improved!

if you'd like you could comment some things that I've really improved on! It can be about both art in general or just digital art!

Some criticisms I have for the old version:

There's literally no shading whatsoever. :unamused:

I literally took the picture of my tablet with my phone PFFFFT (that's why I use my phone for digital art now)(I was doing that for a while now but I stopped a couple months ago)

Bad anatomy :anguished:

The hair looks so bad- it's so.....Wide???? :open_mouth:

The hair streak looks bad too...It isn't right...

Oh yeah, it looks like she has a bald spot on her head :joy:

She has no eyebrows- :joy: :joy: :joy:

Excuse me old Breial that is not how you draw an eye-

Saika's hair looks too dark of a pink and her hair streak looks pure blue instead of teal... :sweat_smile: