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Hello! Ive finally started to work on my Bloom AU. However, ive decided not to draw It because I feel like It will take too much time; So I will for now on be writing the story board for the Bloom AU, and drawing a few pictures to go along with it. I feel like this way, it will be a lot easier to manage than drawing individual frames.
I hope I didnt dissapoint anyone in any way. But, I do hope you all enjoy my writing style! I dont write often so I need the practice anyways. Im going to be starting off with Iris/May meeting Thorn/Imp. Also, yes I have changed Imps name to Thorn instead of Orchid because it makes more sense. Anyways, without further ado, enjoy!
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Iris flutterd open her eyes, groggy, to find herself in a white, void with a few Golden colored clocks. She blinked a couple of times before calling out to speak, as her words seemed to bounce on walls that weren't there. "Hello? Is anyone here" Iris waited, as the hairs on her neck seemed to rise. The eary scilence seemed so loud. She shudderd. Was she dreaming? Was this all just her mind playing tricks on her, and she would just wake up in her bed beside the window sill, and be greeted by her mother with a lick on the forehead and a
"Good morning." No...It couldn't be a dream.. Is it really? Floating in the distance, was a rat looking figure with small wings and horns. And what was that...Thorns? Around their arms. "Hello?" Iris called out again, as the figure seemed to stare her down, making their way- no, HIS way toward her. He was close enough to where she could tell it was a very small, looking male cat. The cats eyes seemed shocked, almost terrified. He finally opened his mouth to speak, changing his expression comepletely, as if she was a long lost freind
Putting a wary smile on his face, and his eyes bright; the cat spoke. "Well look what the cat dragged in? The names Thorn....And its not a nickname." Thorn streached his paws as if he had just woken up from a nap, finally turning upright to face her. "Mister.... Thorn, where am I? And if you dont mind me asking...WHAT are you?" Iris cringed, hoping she had not offened Thorn in any way. Thorn frowned a bit, before replying with a less freindly tone; "Im Thorn, but you already know that. I am.... A cat. And dont ever call me a rat, seriously...
dont. Annyways, where you are.....Thats a little hard to explain....Ya see kid, you kinda got struck by lightning. You denigrated. Ouch, if you ask me. You were just the lucky gal to run into me." Thorn replied, his words casual, and almost absalutely truthful, as if he had practiced the line over and over in the mirror until he got it right. Iris stared at him for a long moment, before blinking back tears, telling herself hje was lying and that she shouldn't be such a crybaby. "I...I cant be dead! I mean......I was just now at home, sitting by the window! And then my mom-" Iris stopped rambling as she tried to swallow the lump in her throat, before
going quiet for second. "I told my mom I hated her....I didnt get to say goodbye..." Iris started to sob, wiping away tears that sprouted from her eyes with one paw, clearly embarrassed. Iris was very gullible; she beleived a lot of things...And she wouldn't hesitate to cry, especially if someone she just met told her she had died. Kid..I- uh Iris....Iris...IRIS!" Thorn impatiently hissed, his expression showed no pity, with a sprinkle of "I really dont care." Thorn struggled to keep his voice level, but he was clearly frustrated. "Look. You died. Suck
it up. Sometimes life isnt fair. Just- chill out, okay? Just take a breath. Calm down... I can help you, but you're gonna have to quit you're pity party and listen." Iris looked up and nodded, wiping away tears between sniffles. "But..How are you going to help me..? Im dead, airnt I? So the only way you could help..Wait, are you my guardian angel?" Iris wiped away tears, blinking, her eyes, her expression questioning. Thorn looked at her for a long moment, clearly suprised at her remark before casually replying. "Oh, yeah! Im you're guardian
angel. Didnt think you'd find out.... Great guess, kid!" Iris nodded, feeling a bit better. She never imagined her gaurdian angel would be a rat looking cat with batish wings. Though, she knew from her moms stories that a gardian angel was someone that helped you..She could trust Thorn, couldn't she? Thorn cleared his throat before speaking, washing away her thoughts. "Sense you want to live, I have a great deal for you. What you are gonna do, is you are going to work to get you're life back. Help twelve vessels in need in twelve days, and
you're good! Capeshe? Shake my hand, and the deal will be settled. You ready?" Iris looked at his outstretched arm coverd in thorns. "Ready." She grabed the part of his paw that wasn't filled with sharp thorns, and shook his hand. Suddenly, a large ring split the air as pain shot through Irises whole body, making the world fade in and out intil everything went black....
"The deal has been sealed. Lets see how this one holds up, shall we?"
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IMP YOU LIER-
Anyways, I hope you enjoyed my cringeworthy writing skills. Sorry if it was all over the place, but I hope you all enjoyed!
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Comments (4)
WaiT hOw cAn ShE sEe RaT BoI iF ShEs BlInD?
(Just wondering :> Also, great job! I love the emotion may has in the drawing. ;3)
Oh, she can see RaT BoI because shes dead. Shes only blind when shes alive because she was born with it. But sense shes dead, she can see. If that dosent make any sense, then sorry. qwq
Also, thank you!
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Np! I was just a lil confused on the concept. And thanks! :>
She looks so sad....qwq