I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
I bring you
Before I go into the troubles of trying to figure out his design, here’s some backstory! Because I did not put it in his wiki yet :skull:
He was made wrong (supposed to be a sapphire but came out as a weird ass lookin tall guy with eyes on his hands instead of his face) so had to run away before he was shattered. He crash landed on a planet, one where Angel had happened to get it’s civilization to see him as a god and rules tyrannically until his diamonds send someone to bring him back (spoiler alert: nobody came)
Core and Angel came to a mutual agreement that to survive on this world, Angel’s facade had to be kept up and Core had nowhere to go. Core was made to be an “oracle” and basically became a religious leader.
He hated every bit of it but he did what he needed to
Era three came along, Angel realized what he was doing was wrong, and with their powers combined Core and Angel made a ship with their broken ones’ pieces and flew to earth.
Core now resides at Little Homeworld.
Now
My problem.
I have had this issue since the very beginning.
Here’s what he’s inspired by
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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Here are my original concepts of him
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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Small note— Idk how but I mentally switched his eyes from the back of his hands to his palms so that's how it actually is now
I had no idea what to do, so I commissioned Galaxy Spinel to design him with these concepts in mind
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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Despite not coming out what I had in mind, it definitely made it easier to have an idea of what I wanted
So I redesigned him
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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Later on, I realized that I STILL didn’t like him
So I requested Spodumene to redesign him
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
[c]I br](https://image.staticox.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fpm1.aminoapps.vertvonline.info%2F8389%2F327e78a4c59231bb9580907c04bb790ef548edb7r1-1074-1090v2_hq.jpg)
Now, I absolutely love this, but,, it didn’t rlly feel true to his character
But they definitely had a couple points where I was like “I should totally listen to that”
Then I kept trying to redesign him
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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Again
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And again
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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And again
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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And I don’t like any of them.
![I need h e l p-[ci]I have an oc and I don’t like his design no matter what I do but I don’t know what I’m doing wrong
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I am losing my fucking mind.
So uh
If anyone had any ideas/suggestions I would love for you to let me know
please
I need them
Comments (10)
So honestly, after reading about him, I think its a super neat idea. However the labcoat/mad scientist schtick didnt make much sense to me?
I think if he did serve as an oracle and was a defective sapphire, maybe he'd wear more priestly clothing. While still holding a lot of personality in the way he looks.
I also think his hair would be a bit longer and less upwards, like, jet black and almost greasy. I also think maybe he could serve to have some moon imagery but that's just a random thought.
I did a little sketch of my ideas though, hope it helps!!
Reply to: :watermelon: ՏᑭOᗪᑌᗰᗴᑎᗴ :cherries:
Oh it's totally fine! I didn't rlly have much info in his wiki to work with so I get it lol
Ty for taking the time to make that again! I forgot if I said that before but just in case I wanted to say that again—
Reply to: :blue_heart: Umbreduck :blue_heart: #teambluejay
No problem. Fun fact i actually had to draw him 2 times aswell xD
Reply to: :watermelon: ՏᑭOᗪᑌᗰᗴᑎᗴ :cherries:
Lmaooo glad to know I'm not the only one
If he was supposed to be a sapphire maybe some ripped long cloth or like a lab coat that's torn, using gloves instead of bandages and a blindfold instead of bandages! And experiment with colors and hair styles. Maybe try ponytails or buns idk. If you're going for a fire look don't make it spikey but more wavy that ends in spikes. Or singed hair. Maybe even singed clothes too! Idk just some ideas that came to mind. I'm sure eventually you'll be proud of the result