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:cyclone: When God Opens His Eyes :cyclone:

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This is a poem about creation from a Panetheistic and mystical view..it is my view of creation separate from the Judeo Christian version...God/Being has no gender but the title sounded better with a pronoun

When God Opens his Eyes

The chaotic blackness

Velvet silence erring away

When God opens his eyes

Creation stirs

Loud but subtle words

Breathing in and out

The flowing wishs of one

Pour down like a river

Speckled with light and dark

He exuberant in his manner

The waters sleeping away

The sky bellows out a cry

"Wake up!"

As the final wakefull call

The earth grumbles

Sprouting away from his tender hold

Life

 :cyclone: When God Opens His Eyes :cyclone: -[ICU]This is a poem about creation from a Panetheistic and mystical view..it is my view of creation

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