labyrinth-
i entered this maze months ago
with no map
just an ounce of hope
now i’m confined within
these stones flames
the only noise they make
is the echoing of my name
when i walked through those gates
i was told there would be a monster here
but i see no minotaur
the only thing that’s trying to kill me
is my own self-doubt
my own self-loathing
i’m my own downfall
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‘can anybody hear me?’
‘i’m totally nuts, right?’
‘laugh all you want, but i’m not giving up
my only chance is to fight’
Comments (6)
I love your poem! The way it shows that determination to continue on is splendid! And at the end, that dialogue just adds the cheery on top of the cream. Amazing! I wish you good luck!
ahh!! thank you!
I really like how you added that dialogue at the end, nicely done :)
thank you!
It‘s a real neat twist on the whole thing. Props on you
thanks :)