Those droplets that escaped the clouds
rained on me all night
I opened my eyes to the darkness
That surrounded me like air
Scared of the oblivion spread by the dark
I froze where I was
Untill, the demons in my head
Came back for me
Every memory felt like hot iron on my skin
Scarring my soul, my fears were back
My entire life, now just a memory
Muddled moments
The journey's all messed
Living in my head, battling with myself
Lost , tired, torn, defeated
I'm like a tied up knot
Not even trying to find an end
To untangle the mess
In their eyes I lost
Now, done for
I have no future
It's all dull and rough
Ready to end it all, I decided to give up
But before I could say the final goodbye
I asked my exhausted soul
"Why was I never good enough?"
The answer came from within
"Because I strived hard to be
Someone I'm not"
The silence that followed echoed with another question
Who am I then?
Confused and lost
But determined to win
with a thousand desires and a single dream
I'm me, shining in my eyes
My love is never enough
If the first one to receive it
Is not me.
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Comments (2)
Greetings!
In your poem, I really love how you incorporated the lines of the prompt into your poem. And for me your poem gave a message, that one's love will never be enough; if they don't receive it first. It really sent shivers down my spine. You, very nice. Keep going. :purple_heart: :purple_heart:
-yours truly, palesapphire.
and judging from your name, i love v as well asdfghjklkkwmskmw
Thanks for taking time to read my work and writing such beautiful comment. Also I love all the suga just a bit more. V is the first letter of my real name. Again thanks a lot for such a wonderful challenge. :purple_heart: :purple_heart: :yellow_heart: :yellow_heart: