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REVIEW ◖ W3LC0ME ↵ ↵ ▬▭▬▭
𓄴 ᨌ # LO4D + 1NG ᨌ 𓄵
The first of many OC reviews. To submit
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Today, I am reviewing Sora.
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▹ - - ▹ [ TOP1C : 01 ] ﹏ ☻ ᵎᵎ
TYPING .. ꏍ ▬▭▬▭▬▭▬▭ ꏍ ⌨ ꒷
𓊔 𖡩 QUIRK ?! 𖡩 𓊔
The first thing that snatched my eye was
their design. With the color and style of
the hair, I was immediately reminded of
a phoenix. Despite their quirk having
nothing to do with phoenixes, their
appearance does relate to their quirk in
its color scheme, so there's some points.
Light manipulation quirks aren't an
original idea, but not all quirks need to
be crazy unique. I myself have several
characters with different elemental
manipulation quirks. They're one of the
most basic powers, so it makes sense
that the world may be full of them. The
fact you've included a drawback is proof
that you know how quirks should work,
and is generally the mark of a good OC-
maker.
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甲 T0P!C : 02 𓂃 𔘓 ( 🗯 ) ﹆
꒷ ꒦꒷ • ꒦꒷ ꒦꒷ ҂ ½ ː APPEAR — ANCE
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There are two depictions of Sora: one
where they have long, ombre hair, and
another where they have short, half-shaved
hair. I believe the latter is the newest
design, as it is used in the cover image,
and the other style is listed as "old hair."
I do believe the redesign was a great choice
considering the old design lacked many
distinctive or unique traits other than the
hair color. I have no real complaint or
critique about appearance, other than
in relation to their sister, which will be
addressed later.
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⚑ // ⚐ ﹇ . :satellite: ⺀ (( TOP?C : 03 !
▬▭▬▭▬ 𖤘 ……… 𖤘 ꒦꒷ - ꒦꒷ - ꒦
𖡡 PERSON % ALITY ⫘⫘⫘ • ⫘⫘⫘ •
If there was one thing I'd push to improve
about Sora, it would be their personality.
Personality is one of the core aspects of
any OC, and yet all that's supplied is a
list of eight vague traits, and an "etc."
I know explaining a personality can be
a challenge, but even a couple sentences
for each trait would help tremendously.
Additionally, it seems Sora possesses no
negative traits. The closest would be
"demanding," but that's more nuetral
than negative. Keep in mind that even
fictional characters have flaws. Having
none makes Sora feel like a Mary Sue,
and they may be boring to interact with.
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BACK - STO - RY - ——— -
𓄴 ᨌ # LO4D + 1NG ᨌ 𓄵
Similar to personality, we're not given
much detail to the backstory other than
a list of family and their traits.
While backstory is also an important
part of an OC, many people decide not
to include such details on a sheet, and
prefer people to learn things through RP.
However, there is one family member
that drew my interest: Sora's younger
sister. Other than Sora's twin, the sister
is the only family member with art provided.
Comparing Sora to their sister, it's quite
predictable what's going on here. The
sister has ombre hair like Sora, but dark
blue instead of red. Sure enough, her
quirk is called Lunar Emission, and Sora's
is Solar Emission. Props to not giving the
twin the moon powers, but this is a
classic cliché that you can really do
without. Two siblings, one with light
powers and the other with dark powers.
Additionally, and this is less of an issue
considering quirks aren't strictly hereditary,
but relating children's quirks to their
parent's might help in thinking up
something more unique.
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Comments (1)
Hello, and dang I didn't think you would make a whole post about this🤣
Thank you for the review :relieved: It was very interesting to see your point of veiw on my OC, but I do wanna clear things up. Demanding isn't just one of her less positive traits. She's also very feisty in nature and it leaves her with a negative attitude, it can also make her very judgmental. So I dont know why you didn't include that- but on well 🤣
I have a lot more to say about this, but that's a lot of typing :eyes: :droplet: But thank you! I'm glad you like her new design too! (Its actually inspired by a sunset, not a Phoenix)