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Every where I've posted this it's flopped and I'm in serious writer block (even my poem amino didn't help :sleepy: )

If you don't want to read all of this just read the first 2 sentences of the second paragraph and the last paragraph.

When I was younger I wanted to be a songwriter and wrote a LOT of bad songs (most of which was catchy and to this day gets stuck in my head and embarrasses me, Especially when I sing them and people ask me what song it is) however I found an old song I'd wrote and it wasn't too bad (don't get me wrong it was bad, But not as bad as the others) and I've decided to rewrite it in a poem-ese style.

Here is where i need help. The song is about true love and the one and its about a guardian angel who is always there for you, I've recently gotten out of a relationship so I don't have any way of pulling emotions out that way (my poems are typically dark as I use poem writing to get bad thoughts out my head and often write a poem instead of relapsing).

Comment ways your partner makes you feel, Especially if they've helped you when feeling down. It doesn't matter if it doesn't rhyme as I'll reword it. Anything about your partner that makes you realise how much you care about each other. It doesn't matter if its short or a whole paragraph i need somewhere to pull extract from.

Please don't flop this-Every where I've posted this it's flopped and I'm in serious writer block (even my poem amino didn't h
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When I'm down, my lovers make me feel like it's just... okay to be sad. They make me feel normal, and okay, and they make me feel loved with just the way they both talk to me.

When my lovers look at me with their pretty smiles, they make me feel beautiful and awesome and like I'm all the things that they said I am. They make me feel human. And they show me everyday that I can trust them both, I can love them in return without any fear. It makes me WANT to trust them, and shower them each in love a million times.

Hope this helped :)

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