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Hello, I found this in my drafts and just wanted to compare how I wrote this more than half a year ago and a newer one.

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Old poem.

Never thought I would meet you this way

Tears streaming down your face

"Help" written all over your face

You needed someone to lift you up

Someone to hold you tight

A friend possibly a lover

Was I not enough?

The one who helped you shine

The one who told you to be fine

Was this all too much?

The late-night calls

The long pointless walks

But it was him that you wanted

Him to talk to you

Him to be with you

Is it because I'm a girl?

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Newest poem.

Like a wave, you came the following day

And pushed my sorrows away

Could it be true, you and me

A flower who blossoms in winter

An animal who sleeps in the summer

You're an opposite of the opposite

The calm chaos you brought

Nothing could've compared these thoughts

Your eyes so bright they light up the night

You brought peace to my heart

You're the echo of my thoughts

A calming wind through the gale

The kisses you brought and the words you caught

Wouldn't give it up for a single buck

Make me believe this is the truth

You're in love with me and I'm in love with you.

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Old vs newest poem-[c]Hello, I found this in my drafts and just wanted to compare how I wrote this more than half a year ago
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