Contest Entry W.I.P.

So I'm planning on entering a contest in another art amino I'm in and the theme is your oc stepping up, or something similar. For my entry, I'm drawing my OC, Rose Els. The little comic I'm doing is the moment Rose ed the reapers in order to help cease a war in the name of peace, and her love interest, Lucuis Helm. This is also the same moment that would start her path to becoming a leader of a top tier division of reapers. Sorry if I rambled, and feel free to ask questions if you want.