WARNING:
This story contains graphic imagery! If that makes you uncomfortable I urge you to click away. If not please enjoy.
TIME TAKEN TO WRITE
Aprox 40 minutes- 1 hour
The blood dripped down the chest of the bear. The golden fur stained with red and a small limp body dangling from its jaws. Its mouth opened to continue its song and the body fell to the ground with a hard thud. Michael dropped to his knees and ripped off his mask while pulling his brother to his chest. Tears streamed down his face, he began sobbing an unimaginable amount. His hands were coated with his younger brother's blood.
Everything stopped. His brother's head was cracked, each of the animatronics teeth had delivered a crushing blow to his brother's skull. Hi locks of brown hair were soaked with blood, his face was covered in red, and his heart was barely beating. His breaths were small almost nonexistent, just tiny, slow extremely labored breaths.
Michael looked up at the bear, it's snout and chest stained red. Its cartoony voice was still coming out of the speakers as if nothing had happened, a grim juxtaposition to the blood-soaked yellow fur.
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