I'm in need of for at LEAST one story. It's a fanfic for Fallout called Children of the Vault, which you may or may not have seen recently or in the past.
I've asked friends to give it a read and give , but I've really had no luck finding people who will tell me where the story needs improvement or fixing.
In addition to COTV, I may or may not start another Fallout fic (which will be a spin-off for the current one), and a RWBY fic. Those are both only possibilities at this point, and the characters are still under development.
Overall, I need people who will point out things like lore issues, pacing issues, grammatical and spelling errors (which there aren't usually many of), on characters, things that just don't read right, and anything else that you happen to come across.
I also need to know what I'm doing right with the writing, so that I know what I need to keep doing. It's possible I may even spitball plot ideas to people reading, so that I know if I take a certain direction with the story, it won't be a bad decision.
If you're interested, shoot me a pm! I could definitely use the help and even if this isn't in your comfort zone, all would be useful.
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