Spartan here enjoy the story it's shorter because I'm testing if I can still write stories
![The mindless part 1-Spartan here enjoy the story it's shorter because I'm testing if I can still write stories
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chapter 1
Brooks always has nightmares about these beings the creature that had no will or conscious the top half of there heads missing and skin a brown color. They were horrible creatures but we're they real? Brooks always asked that question after his dreams but what happend if the dreams were just a warning?
chapter 2
Brooks spent his days mindlessly going too school and hanging out with his friends. He was bored of his life but when it was time too sleep he felt truly alive. Dreams were Brooks way of escaping the confides of reality and he loved it he was a lucid dreamer those who had control over there dreams. But about 3 years ago around 11 he started having dreams more like nightmares of this creature he couldn't get rid of it for him this was a shock. The creature never said anything and always watched with its non-existent eyes. It appeared in every one of his dreams as he slowly lost control of his own dreams by 14 he had no control over his own dreams.
chapter 3
Brooks became terrified too sleep his once favorite pastime became a nightmare literally. He developed insomnia and slowly lost grip with reality. His once fragile life torn too pieces as he stopped going too school his parents took him to the therapist and prescribed him sleeping meds. This made Brooks more scared scared of his family friends and even the doctor. The depths of his mind poised in agony of that creature. He slowly went insane he couldn't reality from real life when sleep meds on him he another dream and there that creature was as it smiled evily it's teeth disfiguring into shark like jaws as it walked towards him.
chapter 4
Brooks couldn't move he was filled with fear he couldn't move even if he wanted too because the beast was calling the shots. It's jaw unhinged like a viper as rows of teeth appeared but it went up to his ear and whispered to him "I'm coming for you ". As it said that it backed away and disappeared and Brooke woke up. He checked if he was still alive he was paralyzed with fear terrified too even get up those words echoed to his very core. Brooks saw something in the corner of his room as he looked around.
chapter 5
Brooks bolted out of bed as he charged through his door as he lunged towards it as the door was flimsy he fell right through it. His parents heard this and ran as the creature was looking through the hole in the door and smiles again evily as his parents even saw it. But the mindless don't care who you are they will find you and your dream and mind aren't safe Brooks might not survive but then again how would you all know hehehe.
So be continue comment what you think and so on
Comments (2)
I recommend making the chapters longer
Yeah I will just wanted too try my hand at this type of writing