Need help with writing Heroes v Dictator

I need help with advice on writing Heroes v Dictator.

I'm writing part 3 now (I sadly have to spoil the surprise but part 4 will be a surprise for later) I need writing advice on how to better write certain characters like the canon characters and to better write narration, descriptions and things, please if any of you have suggestions then please tell me. :pray: 🏼 :green_heart: :sparkles:

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