When I was ten, my sister's hamster died.
We buried him in a shallow grave outside,
A small ceremony.
My father's large, worn hands
The sole coffin bearer.
My sister, aged twelve, softly cried.
Stood quietly by the minature graveside,
I didn't really understand,
What her tears were about,
But held her hand anyway.

Comments (10)
That's so sad but sweet :'(
But I loved it :3
This reminds me a bit of me and my brother :heart_eyes: :frowning:
That's cool:) I only have sisters
Reply to: Sloyan
I have one big brother :joy: I think having a sister would be annoying haha
Love the last couple of lines. It really shows the young innocence of the piece.
Thank you. It's great to hear that that's something I managed to convey through my writing:)!!
Leave a comment if you enjoyed the poem:) Hope you all do!