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Death of a Hamster

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Sloyan 01/13/17
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When I was ten, my sister's hamster died.

We buried him in a shallow grave outside,

A small ceremony.

My father's large, worn hands

The sole coffin bearer.

My sister, aged twelve, softly cried.

Stood quietly by the minature graveside,

I didn't really understand,

What her tears were about,

But held her hand anyway.

Death of a Hamster-When I was ten, my sister's hamster died.

We buried him in a shallow grave outside,
A small ceremony.
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This reminds me a bit of me and my brother :heart_eyes: :frowning:

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1 Reply 01/18/17

Reply to: Sloyan

I have one big brother :joy: I think having a sister would be annoying haha

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1 Reply 01/18/17

Love the last couple of lines. It really shows the young innocence of the piece.

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1 Reply 01/14/17

Thank you. It's great to hear that that's something I managed to convey through my writing:)!!

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1 Reply 01/14/17

Leave a comment if you enjoyed the poem:) Hope you all do!

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