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OH MAN A FEATURE TMT THANK YOU SO MUCH.
Content
Greetings
Other Idea
OriginalSong and other Parody
Why am I choosing this song?
Stronger than you by Zuko
Stonger than you by Azula
Meter
Thank
Hashtag
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Greetings
Hey, here is Lis again with a new entry!
It is a parody for one of my favourite songs. I guess it is really popular and I thought it suits well. Oh and if you fell like making honor jokes I will be there!
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Ideas
First I want to ask you, if I should include my first ideas to other Song parodys here, that would be only one verse and one refrain, but I could edit here to the post, if you want
I had idea for
Reflection (Toph)
Honor to us all (maybe Toph)
Ready as i'ill ever be (Team Avatar or Zuko)
I will make you proud (Zuko)
Sorry by Justin (Zuko to iroh)
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OriginalSong and other Parody
Original from steven universe by Rebecca Sugar universe
Undertale parody, was kind of also my Inspiration:
Gravity Falls parody:
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Why am I choosing this song?
Okay now it is my turn. Because there are a lot of changing moments, I choose Zuko from the Agni Kai.
Why? Because I think he is the most self confident and there for the stonger form of him.
And also Azulas changing could be represented by this song qiete well!
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![Stronger than you Zuko and Azula version-[CI]Edit:
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[CI]Greetings
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Stronger than you
by Zuko
Here we are again
Just you and me Azula right?
But I will not lose this time
An Agni Kai
That is fine
But I will never give up the throne to the likes of you
'Cause now I am so much better
And every part of me is saying go beat her
And we both know who will win and is gonna rule
Only you are making yourself a total fool
Let's go, just me and you
Let's go, with lightning too.
Go ahead and try and hit me if you're able!
I can see that your emotions are unstable
Can't you see how your powers slowly dwindle?
But I think you're just mad 'cause you're single
You're not gonna stop what I'm supposed to be
'Cause this is and will be the fate of me
Come on, shoot as much of your deadliest lighting at me
I am able to redirect every one, you see
I restored my oh-oh-oh-oh-own
Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor, hoh-oh-oh-oh-onor
Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor ho-oh-oh-oh-oner ho-oh-oh-oh-onor
This is who we are
This is who I am
And if you think you can beat me
Then you need to think again
'Cause I am a fighter
And I won't end
I won't let you take my duty
I won't let you take my fate
Go ahead and try and hit me if you're able!
Can't you see that you are unstable
I know you think I'm not something you're afraid of
'Cause you think that you've seen what my fire is made of
Well it is even more than you believe
With fire there is much more to achieve
It is the sun, it is the life
It is determination
That makes me stonger than you
Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor, noh-oh-oh-oh-onor
I restored my o-own
Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor
I restored my o-own
Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor
That makes me stonger than you
Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor Ho-oh-oh-oh-onor
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Stronger than you
by Azula
It is the princess
with perfection
And I am never loseing to the hands of the likes of you
Because I'm so much better
There will never be one who could be better,
That is why everyone follow my rules
Beating me? You are just a naive fool
Let's go, just me and you
I just need one hit for you
Go ahead and try and hit me if you're able!
Can't you see that my I am completely stable?
All the self-confidence you have to be faking
There is not one mistake I am making
You're not gonna survive like this forever,
And A Loser like you will not win, never.
That you can redirect my lightning, I am aware of
But still my perfection is what I am made of
I do not ne-ee-ee-ee-ed
Lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, Loh-oh-oh-oh-ove
Lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove
That is what I can
This is who I am
And if you think you can beat me
Then you need to think again
Cause I will never fail
I'm so sorry it ends like this,
For me there is no need for any friends
Go ahead and try and hit me if you're able!
Can't you see that my I am completely stable?
Why do you sound just so much like our dear mother?
Surely you have been send send by her, brother
Again our mother is taking your side
Hating me, but something better is what I find
I am the monster, I am the ruler
And you are the loser
I do not ne - ee - ee -ee- ed
Lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, oh-oh-oh-oh-ove
And I do not want her
Lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove
That why I am stronger than you
Lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove
I am fine with noooo
Lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove, lo-oh-oh-oh-ove
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Meter
Okay now I want to show you how I tried to include the meter into it, cause I put so damn much work into it! It is not 100% I guess still I am really proud of it!
Original
Verse 1:
Syllable decomposition:
(this) (is) (gar | net)
(back) (to | get | her)
(and) (i) (am) (ne | ver) (go | ing) (down) (at) (the) (hands) (of) (the) (li | kes) (of) (you)
(be | cau | se) (i) (am) (so) (much) (bet | ter)
(and) (e | ve | ry) (part) (of) (me) (is) (say | ing) (go) (get) (her)
(the) (two) (of) (us) (arn) (t) (gon | na) (fol | low) (your) (ru | les)
(co | me) (at) (me) (wit | hout) (a | ny) (of) (your) (fan | cy) (tools)
(let) (it) (go), (just) (me) (and) (you)
(let) (es) (go), (just) (o | ne) (on) (two)!
Metric:
Syllables = 4, stress = "+ - + -"
Syllables = 4, stress = "+ - + -"
Syllables = 17, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "+ - + - + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "+ - + - + - + -"
Verse 2:
Syllable decomposition:
(go) (a | he | ad) (and) (try) (and) (hit) (me) (if) (you) (re) (ab | le)!
(can) (t) (you) (see) (that) (my) (re | la | ti | ons | hip) (is) (stab | le)?
(i) (can) (see) (you) (ha | te) (the) (wa | y) (we) (in | ter | min | gle)
(but) (i) (think) (you) (re) (just) (mad) (cau | se) (you) (re) (sing | le)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Verse 3:
Syllable decomposition:
(and) (you) (re) (not) (gon | na) (stop) (what) (we) (ma | en) (to | get | her)
(we) (a | re) (gon | na) (stay) (li | ke) (this) (fo | re | ver)
(if) (you) (bre | ak) (us) (a | part) (we) (ll) (just) (co | me) (back) (ne | who)
(and) (we) (ll) (al | ways) (be) (twi | ce) (the) (gem) (that) (you) (a | re)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 15, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Verse 4:
Syllable decomposition:
(i) (am) (ma | de) (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (of)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
Metric:
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 5:
Syllable decomposition:
(this) (is) (who) (we) (a | re)
(this) (is) (who) (ieh) (am)
(and) (if) (you) (think) (you) (can) (stop) (me)
(then) (you) (need) (to) (think) (a | ga | in)
(cau | se) (i) (am) (ah) (fair | ling)
(and) (i) (will) (ne | ver) (end)
(and) (i) (wo) (t) (you) (hurt) (my) (pla | net)
(and) (i) (wo) (t) (you) (hurt) (my) (fri | ends)
Metric:
Syllables = 6, emphasis = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 5, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 8, emphasis = "- + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 8, emphasis = "- + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Syllables = 6, emphasis = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - +"
Verse 6:
Syllable decomposition:
(go) (a | he | ad) (and) (try) (and) (hit) (me) (if) (you) (re) (ab | le)!
(can) (t) (you) (see) (that) (my) (re | la | ti | ons | hip) (is) (stab | le)?
(i) (know) (you) (think) (i) (am) (not) (so | me | thing) (you) (re) (af | ra | id) (of)
(cau | se) (you) (think) (that) (you) (ve) (seen) (what) (i) (m) (ma | de) (of)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 16, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 7:
(well) (i) (am) (e | ven) (mo | re) (than) (the) (two) (of) (them)!
(e | ve | ry | thing) (they) (ca | re) (ab | out) (is) (what) (i) (am)!
(i) (am) (their) (fu | ry), (i) (am) (their) (pa | ti | en | ce)
(i) (am) (ah) (con | ver | sa | ti | on)!
(i) (am) (ma | de) (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (of)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(and) (it) (it) (stron | ger) (than) (you)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(and) (it) (it) (stron | ger) (than) (you)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(and) (it) (it) (stron | ger) (than) (you)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
Metric:
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "+ - + - + -"
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "+ - + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 7, stress = "+ - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 7, stress = "+ - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 7, stress = "+ - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + -"
Zuko
Preword:
Syllable decomposition:
(he | re) (we) (a | re) (a | ga | in)
(just) (you) (and) (me) (a | to | la) (right)?
(but) (i) (will) (not) (lo | se) (this) (ti | me)
Metric:
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Verse 1:
Syllable decomposition:
(an) (ag | ni) (kai)
(that) (is) (fi) (e)
(but) (i) (will) (ne | ver) (gi | ve) (up) (the) (thro | ne) (to) (the) (li | kes) (of) (you)
(cau | se) (now) (i) (am) (so) (much) (bet | ter)
(and) (e | ve | ry) (part) (of) (me) (is) (say | ing) (go) (beat) (er)
(and) (we) (both) (know) (who) (will) (win) (and) (is) (gon | na) (ru | le)
(on | ly) (you) (a | re) (ma | king) (your | self) (a) (to | tal) (fool)
(let) (it) (go), (just) (me) (and) (you)
(let) (es) (go), (with) (lig | htning) (to | o).
Metric:
Syllables = 4, stress = "+ - + -"
Syllables = 4, stress = "+ - + -"
Syllables = 17, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "+ - + - + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "+ - + - + - + -"
Verse 2:
Syllable decomposition:
(go) (a | he | ad) (and) (try) (and) (hit) (me) (if) (you) (re) (ab | le)!
(i) (can) (see) (that) (your) (e | mo | ti | ons) (a | re) (un | stab | le)
(can) (t) (you) (see) (how) (your) (po | whos) (slow | ly) (dwind | le)?
(but) (i) (think) (you) (re) (just) (mad) (cau | se) (you) (re) (sing | le)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Verse 3:
Syllable decomposition:
(you) (re) (not) (gon | na) (stop) (what) (i) (am) (sup | po | sed) (to) (be)
(cau | se) (this) (is) (and) (will) (be) (the) (fa | te) (of) (me)
(co | me) (on), (shoot) (ate) (much) (of) (your) (dead | li | est) (lig | hting) (at) (me)
(i) (am) (ab | le) (to) (re | di | rect) (e | ve | ry) (o | ne), (you) (see)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 15, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 15, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 4:
Syllable decomposition:
(i) (res | to | red) (my) (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (own)
(ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor), (high) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor)
(ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ner) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor)
Metric:
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 5:
Syllable decomposition:
(this) (is) (who) (we) (a | re)
(this) (is) (who) (ieh) (am)
(and) (if) (you) (think) (you) (can) (beat) (me)
(then) (you) (need) (to) (think) (a | ga | in)
(cau | se) (i) (am) (a) (figh | ter)
(and) (i) (won) (tea) (end)
(i) (won) (tea) (let) (you) (ta | ke) (my) (du | ty)
(i) (won) (tea) (let) (you) (ta | ke) (my) (fa)(te)
Metric:
Syllables = 6, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 5, emphasis = "- + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 5, emphasis = "- + - +"
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Verse 6:
Syllable decomposition:
(go) (a | he | ad) (and) (try) (and) (hit) (me) (if) (you) (re) (ab | le)!
(can) (tea) (you) (see) (that) (you) (a | re) (un | stab | le)
(i) (know) (you) (think) (i) (ehm) (not) (so | me | thing) (you) (re) (af | ra | id) (of)
(cau | se) (you) (think) (that) (you) (see) (seen) (what) (my) (fi) (is) (ma | de) (of)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 11, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 16, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 16, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 7:
Syllable decomposition:
(well) (it) (is) (e | ven) (mo | re) (than) (you) (be | lie | ve)
(with) (li | fe) (the | re) (is) (much) (mo | re) (to) (ach | ie | ve)
(it) (is) (the) (sun), (it) (is) (the) (li | fe)
(it) (is) (de | ter | mi | na | ti | on)
(i) (res | to | red) (my) (own)
(ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor), (noh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor)
(that) (ma | kes) (me) (ston | ger) (than) (you)
(ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor)
(ieh) (res | to | red) (my) (oh) - (own)
(ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor)
(that) (ma | kes) (me) (ston | ger) (than) (you)
(ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor) (ho) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | nor)
Metric:
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, stress = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 6, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Azula
Verse 1:
Syllable decomposition:
(it) (is) (the) (prin | cess)
(with) (per | fec | ti | on)
(and) (ieh) (am) (ne | ver) (lo | se | ing) (to) (the) (hands) (of) (the) (li | kes) (of) (you)
(be | cau | se) (ieh) (ehm) (so) (much) (bet | ter)
(the | re) (will) (ne | ver) (be) (o | ne) (who) (could) (be) (bet | ter),
(that) (is) (why) (e | ve | ry | o | ne) (fol | low) (my) (ru | les)
(be | a | ting) (me)? (you) (a | re) (just) (ah) (na | i | ve) (fool)
(let) (it) (go), (just) (me) (and) (you)
(ieh) (just) (need) (o) (hit) (for) (you)
Metric:
Syllables = 5, emphasis = "+ - + -"
Syllables = 5, emphasis = "+ - + -"
Syllables = 17, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 9, emphasis = "+ - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 7, stress = "+ - + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "+ - + - + -"
Verse 2:
Syllable decomposition:
(go) (a | he | ad) (and) (try) (and) (hit) (me) (if) (you) (re) (ab | le)!
(can) (tea) (you) (see) (that) (my) (ieh) (am) (com | ple | te | ly) (stab | le)?
(all) (the) (self) - (con | fi | the | ce) (you) (ha | ve) (to) (be) (fa | king)
(the | re) (is) (not) (o | ne) (mis | ta | ke) (ieh) (am) (ma | king)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Verse 3:
Syllable decomposition:
(you) (re) (not) (gon | na) (sur | vi | ve) (li | ke) (this) (fo | re | ver),
(and) (a) (looser) (li | ke) (you) (will) (not) (win), (ne | ver).
(that) (you) (can) (re | di | rect) (my) (lig | htning), (i) (am) (a | wa | re) (of)
(but) (still) (my) (per | fec | ti | on) (is) (what) (ieh) (am) (ma | de) (of)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 15, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + - +"
[CI]Verse 4:
Syllable decomposition:
(ieh) (do) (not) (ne) - (e | e) - (e | e) - (e | e) - (ed)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (loh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
Metric:
Syllables = 11, stress = "- + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Stanza 5:
Syllable decomposition:
(that) (is) (what) (i) (can)
(this) (is) (who) (i) (am)
(and) (if) (you) (think) (you) (can) (beat) (me)
(then) (you) (need) (to) (think) (a | ga | in)
(cau | se) (i) (will) (ne | ver) (fail)
(i) (ehm) (so) (sor | ry) (it) (ends) (li | ke) (this),
(for) (me) (the | re) (is) (n) (need) (for) (a | ny) (fri | ends)
Metric:
Syllables = 5, stress = "+ - + - +"
Syllables = 5, stress = "+ - + - +"
Syllables = 8, stress = "+ - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "+ - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "+ - + - + - +"
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 6:
Syllable decomposition:
(go) (a | he | ad) (and) (try) (and) (hit) (me) (if) (you) (re) (ab | le)!
(can) (tea) (you) (see) (that) (my) (ieh) (am) (com | ple | te | ly) (stab | le)?
(why) (do) (you) (sound) (just) (so) (much) (li | ke) (our) (de | ar) (mot | her)?
(su | re | ly) (you) (ha | ve) (be) (send) (send) (by) (her), (bread)
Metric:
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 14, emphasis = "+ - + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Verse 7:
Syllable decomposition:
(a | ga | in) (our) (mot | her) (is) (ta | king) (your) (si | en)
(ha | ting) (me), (but) (so | me | thing) (bet | ter) (is) (what) (i) (find)
(i) (am) (the) (mons | ter), (i) (am) (the) (ru | ler)
(and) (you) (a | re) (the) (lo/ser)
(i) (do) (not) (ne) - (e | e) - (e | e) - (e | e) - (ed)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(and) (i) (do) (not) (want) (her)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(that) (why) (i) (am) (stron | ger) (than) (you)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
(i) (am) (fi) (with) (no | o | oo)
(lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve), (lo) - (oh ) - (oh) - (oh) - (o | ve)
Metric:
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 13, stress = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 10, emphasis = "- + - + - + -"
Syllables = 7, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 11, stress = "- + - + - + - +"
Syllables = 12, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 6, emphasis = "- + - + -"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
Syllables = 8, stress = "- + - + - +"
Syllables = 18, emphasis = "- + - + - + - + - + - + -"
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I really have to thank puffnboots, because she helped me a lot with reading through it and correct me, when the gramma was wrong ang also gave me a really .
Thank you so much
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Comments (24)
HONOR lmao 🤣 that was such a masterpiece, I can’t believe I just saw it now, but now I really need someone to sing this 🥺 :green_heart:
I also would love it maybe we find some singer it would be insane
ahhh yesss! it's great!
Man I’m late :sweat_smile:
But anyway it’s amazing! Gosh two shows I love so much with such a perfect scene too, this is genius!
Reply to: GoddessWarrior28
Yeah so true!
I mean I do not like Pink from the beginning I guess..
I found Rose okay, but still for her it all was a joke at the beginning with Greg.. and I could imagen she knew it would hurt Pearl... so... 🤷♀
Reply to: Princess Serena.
Yeah, I’m pretty optimistic so I try to look for the good in everyone. But everytime Pink keeps pushing it :sweat_smile:
Reply to: GoddessWarrior28
Yeah... I mean i guess she changed quite well and wants to do good things, but like spinel she can be really subborn.
Gosh i'm such an awful person
I just saw it now
AHHHHHHHH-
anyways
IT
WAS
AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGG
Hahahhahahah thanks xS
You are not an awul person for that!
But thank for the comment and nice words!!!
Wow, you put a ton lot of effort into this! Thanks for entering the challenge!
awwwww I was hopeing that you can see it!
I gave as much as I could do making the best I could.
I am impressed sometimes how I am not as bad at meter as I thought I would be xD