Hello Artists!
Every Monday we hold a community wide critique session on our Art Amino Official Chat!
Critique is a necessary means to improving your work as an artist. Often we as artists are too close to our work and can overlook somethings that could further the success of a piece.
Now before we get started let's establish a few rules to help ensure this session stays constructive.
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:low_brightness: How it's going to work :low_brightness:
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1. Post up to 2 pieces of art you would like a critique on.
:bangbang: PLEASE LIMIT TO TWO PIECES ONLY :bangbang:
Don't post if you just want praise. This is for critique on how to IMPROVE your art and help you grow as an artist.
2. Anyone may comment a critique on an artwork but the thing to is to keep it CONSTRUCTIVE.
Statements like "It's bad" " Sucks" " Your style would be better like ..." are not considered constructive criticism.
3)We shall be using the two stars and a wish format.
This means you give a couple comments on what is successful and then give an improvement.
An example:
I like the way you drew the hair and your choice of colors were successful. I feel you could improve the eyes. The left one's perspective is off. Perhaps taking some time to do some studies would further help!
You can also give examples and drawn corrections to further help the artist.
The point of this is to help your fellow artists improve their art. Not to make anyone feel bad or make anyone want to give up art.
4) NO ARGUING!
Please don't start fights in the comments. It's not productive.
5) And this is an important one:
:bangbang: If you ask for a critique please leave a critique for someone else in return :bangbang:
This helps everyone get some . Let's all work to get better together.
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Comments (402)
The whole point of my Cube series is to create a cube that looks realistic as if photographed in some off place. I feel once I accomplish this i could draw anything. I would like some maybe you can see something I dont.
This looks great and the shading is exceptional it's just that some of your lines aren't as sharp or well defined as they could be and the shadow is a little long and thin. I took a screenshot of your drawing and used the markup tool in the photos app to outline the two problems I saw. FYI this is really nitpicky and your drawing is amazing.
Reply to: EmeraldÉire🏳 :rainbow:
Thx for the !! Ill be playing around with the shadows in the future :+1:
I'm ready trying to improve my backgrounds I'm just starting with it, but any insight would be great.
Backgrounds are crazy difficult, the one advice i can give is to use them to guide the eye throughout ur work or to highlight a specific focal point. This will make even simple backgrounds amazing. I love the dynamism of the figure the problem your having is your figure is fighting with that yellow poster. I would either change the yellow or move the poster closer to the feet as it would give your eye a starting point and your eye will end up going up the leg and finish at the torso and head part of the figure. Id also move the white poster either further away from the figure or have it cross the leg. You dont want subjects almost touching or touching at line art level. It confuses the eye as its fighting to what it should look at first. This is great art btw the pose iz amazing :ok_hand: :sparkles:
Reply to: Mouse
Thanks I've been playing with more intricate posing and I noticed those things about the background, especially the yellow one after I had inked it and I'm unfortunately a traditional artist and couldn't change it. Thanks for the tho it is very helpful.
Hiya! What do you think?
Reply to: EmeraldÉire🏳 :rainbow:
Thanks for the advice though!
Reply to: Shtashica
No I'm talking about the hair line.
Looks awesome I very much like the expression but if you really wanna kick it up a notch you gtta crank up the darkness on the shadows, especially where the light is, make those real dark. Also your shadows should have levels of darkness. You did a little where the eyelid is at but if you continue by looking where even darker shadows would be it would significantly make your colors pop.
Hello! I made this a while ago, but I don't really like how it looks like... I think it's the colors.. or maybe the lineart... Any advice?
Feel free to critique :blush: :blush: